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edit4(3rd September):: Fixed the rest of the details so they're done... bg will (if all goes well) show up tomorrow~ Feel free to comment!

edit3(3rd September):: Changed the colour a bit on the coat, I didn't like the overly contrasted shadows, so I toned them down a bit. Continued with the earthy colours of the clothes underneat... and yay - she now has coloured eyes XD

edit2(3rd September):: Shirt fixed, gotta go take a shower soon since I've gotta head down to the bank by 3PM.

edit(3rd September):: fixed hair, skin and the coat... I'm wondering a little bit about what colours to use for the shirt... any ideas?

Okay, I started looking through my journals this morning (Since I'm ill and bored =.= ) and ended up checking out the journal where I had been tagged with a character-thingy where you had to choose some of your OCs and make them answer questions (great fun, really).

And so, I stumbled across the fact that I have NEVER really drawn this OC, since she was only an OC for a fanfic of mine (several, even) and I created her when I was eleven, but didn't start drawing until I was 14.

So who is she?

Name: Ashley Andyar (LAAAAAAAAME XD)
Age: 13 (at start of Fanfic1), 15(Fanfic2), 17(start fanfic 3) and 19(End of fanfic 3 - and here)
Height: 1.45(1), 1.60(2), 1.74(start 3), 1.77(end 3)
Occupation: Pokémon Trainer(1), Aspiring Scientist/Pokémon Trainer(2), Scientist Apprentice(start3), Lead Scientist(end3)
Pokémon: (After fanfic 3)
-Flareon (Keyhala)
-Jolteon (Keyhani)
-Vaporeon (Keyhare)
-Espeon (Keyhasu)
-Umbreon (Keyhako)
-Eevee (Keyha)

(Wondering about the lame names of the pkmns? Well, there was legendary stuff, and 'Keyha' means 'road/key to' and the endings are their respective element ('la' being 'fire' and so on)... So yah D8)

EITHER WAY - she's my PKMN-trainer/Scientist OC who's a genius and is engaged to ANOTHER PKMN OC of mine - Kenta. Have to wait and see if I ever come around to draw HIM, too...

...As for colouring... I'll probably do that tomorrow 83

Feel free to comment for now~!
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Very dynamic. You placed a lot of movement even though she is standing still. You got some nice colors in the work as well. The proportion are very accurate as Manga or Anime standard go. You also got a good sense of value as you shaded and highlighted the work. Some part of the delivery can improve. You should avoid cropping her feet off. Some artist would crop parts off but not at the feet, it make it look like it not well planned. It would also be nice to have a background as well. However you are good and ready to push your skill to the next level. What you need to do is try some experiments and risks. If the idea seems great and you seem intimidated try it any ways. Try posed or views with difficult foreshortening. Try anything that you like but also challenges your skill. You will get better that way.

Good work